Feedback for Zoe Altus
Steven Lee | Interaction Foundations Fall '19
AESTHETIC
- Images have a lot of whitespace which means a lot of space to play around with the text, trying playing with different positions of the text.
- Again since there is a lot of white space, consider playing with adding background color or something kind of "filter" to the image.
- Try different fonts! You have a lot of room for creating an even more dynamic/interesting postcard.
- Play with different font weights and text decoration.
- I know you're having trouble finding quality images of this, but try to find a more busy image to contrast with the more simple ones.
- Try to find images that take up the whole width and height of the page.
- For the first postcard, you could create bigger font to accentuate the dynamic image.
STRUCTURE
- Currently structure is very much centered text and image, try to play around with the hierarchy.
- Not much to say about the structure, nothing is conflicting with each other because images aren't too busy.