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Feedback from Bread/Miles
- "I'm smart enough to know you're a phone" -Abram
- For text that has higher emphasis (ie: "Step 1"), you might want to put it in color (instead of black) or bold it. This would help you differentiate it further from the body copy.
- For the reviews, add a space in between the name and the |, ie: "Bob | 10/15/19"
- Helvetica nueue doesn't necessarily work that well for web
- Do your images have to be the full width of the screen? They're a little overpowering, esp in comparison to the instructions
- Overall your website looks like a website but a little outdated due to your font choices (the script for "cooking" and Helvetica Neue), the line (before the description "Fiery, hearty...", the gray rectangles.
- Why is the body copy of the reviews bolded?
- Round the "Write a review" box corners
- Why does "Reviews" not have the gray box behind it like "Ingredients" and "Preparations" do?
- Your ingredients list is kind of confusing in terms of differentiating between different items. The ones that are more than 1 line look like they're their own ingredient on the second line due to your line spacing/line height. I'd find some way to separate items, such as having bullet points or fixing the line spacing/height.
Feedback from Samantha
- Consider using less images